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TY：https://visas-immigration.service.gov.uk/resume/2c973b95-7d5f-40bf-bb16-e58c723abc1c
TYL：https://visas-immigration.service.gov.uk/resume/00ee9989-4853-4c77-9355-553ee22e8bd4
ty@2005/tyl@1976
--工作内容
Mainly responsible for maintaining and developing the ERP system of our company, as a DBA(Database Administrator) to maintain the database of our company.
At the same time, as the section chief of the information department, responsible for the development and management of some system projects.
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Maintaining and developing the ERP system of our company, as a DBA(Database Administrator) to maintain the database of our company. As the section chief of the information department, responsible for the development and management of some projects.
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主要目的：
--旅行计划日期
20240712-20240724
后改为20240501-20240510
Mainly taking my daughter on a trip, visiting some famous attractions and universities, and maybe considering sending her here to study in the future!
I want to visit the University of Cambridge, Oxford University, British Museum, National Gallery, and Harry Potter Studios.
There are also some famous above ground attractions: Thames, Tower of London, HMS Belfast, Royal Observatory of Greenwich, Westminster Abbey, St. Paul's Cathedral, Big Ben, Windsor Castle, Naval Museum, etc,
>>>deepl
Mainly traveling with my daughter to visit some famous sites and universities, and may consider having my daughter study here in the future!
Would like to browse Cambridge University, Oxford University, British Museum, National Gallery, Harry Potter studios.
There are also some famous places on the ground: River Thames, Tower of London, HMS Belfast, Battleship Belfast, Greenwich Royal Observatory, Westminster Abbey Westminster Abbey, St. Paul's Cathedral, Big Ben, Windsor Castle, the Naval Museum and so on!
>>>主要是带女儿去旅行，参观一些著名景点和大学，也许将来会考虑送她来这里读书！我们想参观剑桥大学、牛津大学、大英博物馆和国家美术馆。还有一些有名的地上景点： 泰晤士河、伦敦塔、贝尔法斯特号、格林威治皇家天文台、威斯敏斯特大教堂、圣保罗大教堂、大笨钟、温莎城堡、海军博物馆等。
Mainly taking my daughter on a trip, visiting some famous attractions and universities, and maybe considering sending her here to study in the future! We want to visit the University of Cambridge, Oxford University, British Museum, National Gallery. There are also some famous above ground attractions: Thames, Tower of London, HMS Belfast, Royal Observatory of Greenwich, Westminster Abbey, St. Paul's Cathedral, Big Ben, Windsor Castle, Naval Museum, etc
参考：
https://zhuanlan.zhihu.com/p/78705155
https://zhuanlan.zhihu.com/p/163092703
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酒店
智选假日伦敦清福德-北环(Holiday Inn Express London Chingford-Nth Circular)hotel-level
沃尔瑟姆福里斯特Walthamstow Avenue显示地图
开业：2001
坐落在Walthamstow，智选假日伦敦清福德-北环在沃尔瑟姆福里斯特占尽地理之宜。从酒店很方便到达Highams Park，仅有1km距离。包括Chingford Mosque、劳埃德公园和Waltham Forest Feel Good Centre都在短距离内，入住酒店的旅客在该地区游览会很方便。酒店邻近多个热门旅游景点，包括Vestry House Museum、Tottenham Marshes和Empire Cinema，旅客可以将行程安排的更加紧凑。
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Rafayel on the left bank! 个人心水！五星级的酒店，套房舒服而且价廉物美！拉斐尔左岸。
Address: 34 Lombard Rd, London SW11 3RF
Phone: 020 7801 3610
（伦敦有哪些不错的酒店？人民币1000元/晚之内，实际住过的 https://www.zhihu.com/question/50487313 ）
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感觉知乎上的真的好土豪，100镑一晚上的环境不差的其实很多啊。就是个住的地方，干净舒适就好了，伦敦是个小地方，来往交通又方便，1个小时车程怎么说也解决了。连锁的ibis，premier inn，机场附近的都很便宜，坐到市区不到一个小时，附近还有羊驼可以看。Paddington附近的很多100-的单人间，房间虽然不大但是也算是市区啊。http://booking.com上多找找说不定会碰到打折的，都不是没必要住那种很市区的地方，只要不是私人开的酒店几点回去其实都无所谓，晚上也安全。没必要住市区，地铁很好坐，而且很方便。airbnb上单间更便宜啊，整套房子在市区的也不需要那么贵啊，大家都好有钱，很多整套房子的（不大）也都是70镑左右不到100镑啊。
>>>最终版本
--旅行计划简述
主要是带女儿去旅游，参观一些著名的景点和大学，（xx-以后可能考虑让女儿来这里留学！)
想去浏览剑桥大学，牛津大学，大英博物馆，国家美术馆，哈利波特摄影棚。
还有一些著名的地上：泰晤士河，伦敦塔，HMS Belfast 贝尔法斯特战舰，格林威治皇家天文台，Westminster Abbey 威斯敏斯特大教堂，圣保罗大教堂，大本钟，温莎城堡，海军博物馆等，
Mainly taking my daughter on a trip, visiting some famous attractions and universities, （xx-and maybe considering sending her here to study in the future!) We want to visit the University of Cambridge, Oxford University, British Museum, National Gallery. There are also some famous above ground attractions: Thames, Tower of London, HMS Belfast, Royal Observatory of Greenwich, Westminster Abbey, St. Paul's Cathedral, Big Ben, Windsor Castle, Naval Museum, etc
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Traveling with my father, visiting some famous attractions and universities.(xx-and maybe considering sending her here to study in the future!) We want to visit the University of Cambridge, Oxford University, British Museum, National Gallery. There are also some famous above ground attractions: Thames, Tower of London, HMS Belfast, Royal Observatory of Greenwich, Westminster Abbey, St. Paul's Cathedral, Big Ben, Windsor Castle, Naval Museum, etc
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美国拒签原因
My father and I submitted US visa application to the embassy in Beijing on November 20 2023 and it was denied. I don't know the exact reason. I think it might be because I did not fully explain the purpose and reason for going to the United States. Therefore, the visa officer could not make a decision and refused my application.
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My daughter and I submitted US visa application to the embassy in Beijing on November 20 2023 and it was denied.
I don't know the exact reason.
I think it might be because I did not fully explain the purpose and reason for going to the United States.
Therefore, the visa officer could not make a decision and refused my application.
taoyl@1976
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额外信息：
以前，由于女儿上初中和高中，学习一直比较紧张，所以我们没有出国旅行。
2023年7月，女儿通过高考并顺利进入大学，有充足的时间了，我们才开始考虑出国旅行。主要是想带女儿去一些发达国家旅行，感受一下发达国家的文化和风俗，近距离了解和感受各个国家的生活方式，礼仪，建筑，饮食，服饰等，拓展视野和增长见识，并参观一些有名的大学，为女儿出国留学做准备。
所以我和女儿在去年暑假的时候去了澳大利亚旅行，在寒假的时候去了韩国旅行，并打算在今年或明年假期去英国和美国旅行。参观之后，我和女儿都将回来继续自己的工作和学习。
此外，由于我妻子在乡镇政府工作（常规工作），暂时不方便出国，所以只能我和女儿先去旅游。
请签证官先生或女士给予支持和签证通过。
非常感谢！
In the past, because my daughter was in junior high school and senior high Schools, and her studies are always intense,so we didn't traveled abroad.
In the last year, my daughter took the college entrance examination and successfully entered the university, so we started to consider traveling abroad. We mainly want to take my daughter to some developed countries to travel, to experience the culture and customs of developed countries, to understand and get up close to feel the lifestyle, etiquette, architecture, food, dress, etc. of each country, to expand vision and increase insights, and visit some famous universities to prepare my daughter's for studying abroad.
So my daughter and I traveled to Australia during last summer vacation, Korea during last winter vacation, and we are planning to travel to the UK and the US during this and next year's vacations. After the visit, both my daughter and I will return to continue our own work and studies.
Sincerely request Mr. or Ms. Visa Officer for support and visa approval.
Sincere thanks!
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以前，由于女儿上初中和高中，学习一直比较紧张，所以我们没有出国旅行。
2023年7月，女儿通过高考并顺利进入大学，有充足的时间了，我们才开始考虑出国旅行。主要是想带女儿去一些发达国家旅行，感受一下发达国家的文化和风俗，【xx-近距离了解和感受各个国家的生活方式，礼仪，建筑，饮食，服饰等】，拓展视野和增长见识，【xx-并参观一些有名的大学，为女儿出国留学做准备。】
所以我和女儿在假期去了澳大利亚和韩国，并打算在今年或明年假期去英国和美国旅行。参观之后，我和女儿都将回来继续自己的工作和学习。
此外，由于我妻子在乡镇政府工作（常规工作），暂时不方便出国，所以只能我和女儿先去旅游。
请签证官先生或女士给予支持和签证通过。
非常感谢！
--疑问
A，提到以后可能送孩子去留学，有人说这个最好不要，避免引起不必要的联想，导致拒签
B，老婆在乡镇政府上班可以直接说吗，有没有其他更好的方式。
是不是写的有点多，太啰嗦了，我主要是向签证官解释的明白些，比如为什么以前没有出国记录，为什么老婆不一起申请。。。
In the past,my daughter was in junior high school and senior high Schools,and her studies are always intense,so we didn't traveled abroad.
In 2023, my daughter passed the college entrance examination and successfully entered university.With sufficient time, we began to consider traveling abroad. I mainly want to take my daughter to some developed countries to travel, to experience the culture and customs to expand vision.
(删除and we will visit some universities to prepare my daughter's for studying abroad. )
So we traveled to Australia and South Korea during the holiday. we plan to travel to the UK and the US during this year or next year's holiday. After the visit, we will all come back to continue our work and studies.
In addition, since my wife works in the township government (regular work), it is not convenient for her to go abroad for the time being, So only my daughter and I can travel first.
Sincerely request Mr. or Ms. Visa Officer for support and visa approval.
Sincere thanks!
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Middle School 中学
secondary schools 中学
high school 高中
junior high school 初中
初中和高中
junior and senior high schools
middle and high school
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而是体验当地的风土人情、文化艺术，在欣赏美景的同时，感受当地的风土人情和生活方式。
出境旅游可以让人们亲身体验不同的文化、风俗和生活方式，了解不同的历史和人文地理，从而增长见识，开拓视野。比如，去欧洲旅游可以感受到浓郁的文艺复兴气息，了解到欧洲多元化的文化和历史；去东南亚旅游可以感受到热带气候的独特魅力，了解到东南亚的风土人情和美食文化。通过旅游，可以让人们更全面地了解世界，拓宽自己的眼界。
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欣赏到不同的风景和建筑。
每个国家都有其独特的地理环境、历史遗产、艺术风格和城市规划，给人带来不同的视觉享受和审美感受。比如，去法国可以看到浪漫的埃菲尔铁塔、卢浮宫和凡尔赛宫；去日本可以看到精致的寺庙、神社和樱花；去埃及可以看到神秘的金字塔、狮身人面像和木乃伊；去美国可以看到现代化的摩天大楼、自由女神像和大峡谷等等。
体验到不同的文化和习俗。
每个国家都有其独特的语言、文字、宗教、节日、礼仪、饮食、服饰等，反映了其深厚的文化底蕴和民族特色。比如，去印度可以听到悠扬的印度音乐、看到多彩的印度舞蹈、参与欢乐的泼水节；去泰国可以感受到佛教的影响、品尝到辣味的泰式菜肴、体验到按摩和水上市场；去意大利可以学习到浪漫的意大利语、品尝到香浓的意式咖啡和披萨、欣赏到文艺复兴时期的杰作等等。
---游览不同国家的城市，建筑，历史和文化
xx感受一下发达国家的文化艺术和风土人情，近距离了解和感受各个国家的生活方式，礼仪，建筑，饮食，服饰等，拓展视野和增长见识，并参观一些有名的大学，为女儿出国留学做准备。
感受一下发达国家的文化和风俗，近距离了解和感受各个国家的生活方式，礼仪，建筑，饮食，服饰等，拓展视野和增长见识，并参观一些有名的大学，为女儿出国留学做准备。
--deepl
To experience the culture and customs of developed countries, to understand and feel the lifestyle, etiquette, architecture, food, dress, etc. of each country, to expand vision and increase insights, and to visit some famous universities to prepare for our daughter's study abroad.
--baidu
To experience the culture and customs of developed countries, get up close to and experience the lifestyles, etiquette, architecture, cuisine, clothing, etc. of each country, broaden your horizons and broaden your horizons, and visit some famous universities to prepare your daughter for studying abroad.
>>>以前，由于女儿上初中和高中，学习一直比较紧张，所以我们没有出国旅行。
2023年女儿参加高考，顺利考上大学，我们才开始考虑出国旅行。主要是想带女儿去一些发达国家旅行，开拓一下眼界，感受一下发达国家的文化和风俗，近距离了解和感受各个国家的生活方式，礼仪，建筑，饮食，服饰等，拓展视野和增长见识，并参观一些有名的大学，为女儿出国留学做准备。
In the past, because my daughter was in junior high school and senior High Schools, and her studies are always intense，so we didn't traveled abroad.
In 2023, my daughter took the college entrance examination and successfully entered the university, so we started to consider traveling abroad. We mainly want to take my daughter to some developed countries to travel, to experience the culture and customs of developed countries, to understand and get up close to feel the lifestyle, etiquette, architecture, food, dress, etc. of each country, to expand vision and increase insights, and to visit some famous universities to prepare for my daughter's study abroad.
